2021年11月27日雅思大作文【责任类】真题范文 (小众题!)

2021年11月27日雅思大作文【责任类】真题范文 (小众题!)

2021年11月27日雅思大作文【责任类】真题范文 (小众题!)


2021年11月27日雅思大作文【责任类】真题范文 (小众题!)


 

各位学霸们好,今天黄老师来跟大家来分享下上周六(2021.11.27)雅思大作文真题范文&解析,本周考题如下:


Some people think parents are responsible for transporting their children to school. Others think it is the government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.


1

题型分析


对于这类责任类的题型,黄老师在之前已经详细分析过其最优写法,即写中立,双方都有责任,这里再重复下其段落结构:


结构1:

1.家长有责任接送孩子。

2.学校有责任接送孩子。

3.接送孩子是家长和学校的共同责任


结构2:

1.家长有责任接送孩子1。

2.家长有部分责任接送孩子2。

3.学校也有部分责任接送孩子。


同学们切记,无论写哪种结构,最后的结论都是:双方都有责任!


那么,带着这个思路,我们来看看这篇文章的满分词汇和范文吧!(范文均由黄老师由英文期刊杂志中摘抄好词好句写出,同学们可以放心背诵)


2

满分词汇和正确观点段落


2021.11.27真题


Some people think parents are responsible for transporting their children to school. Others think it is the government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.


满分词汇:


legal guardian n. 法定监护人

primary responsibility n. 主要职责

bonding n. 加深感情

drop off and pick up v.接送

brew v. 酝酿(发生)

facilitie v. 促进

en route adv. 途中

essential services n. 必要服务

rural and regional areas n. 乡村偏远地区


观点1-1:


Parents, who are the legal guardian of their children, should have primary responsibility for transporting their kids to and from school. Besides, it is a good bonding opportunity for parents to drop off and pick up their kids as such journeys are good place for daily conversation to be brewed, which facilities a mutual understanding to each other.


观点1-2:


In addition, transportation may present potential risks to children depending on how it occursand how transition between a vehicle and an education and care service premises is managed. It is impractical for state run school buses to pick up each children at their front doors and to carefully manage them en route, whereas parents can easily do that.


观点2:


However, it is government’s job to provide essential services to the general public – especially to those with great need – through allocating its tax revenue. Therefore, it should assist families in rural and regional areas, and families with difficulties in delivering their children to school, by transporting students to school with school bus program.



2021年11月27日雅思大作文【责任类】真题范文 (小众题!)


2021年11月27日雅思大作文【责任类】真题范文 (小众题!)

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