各位学霸们好，今天黄老师跟大家来分享一下上周六（2021.3.13）雅思大作文真题范文。上周六考题如下：
Music has always been and continues to be the universal language of mankind. To what extend agree disagree?
这道题从逻辑上来说比较简单，题干核心词较少。同学们抓住music和universal language去论述即可。但是该题的难点在于论点的选词和构思上。对于选词，音乐的节奏，韵律，传达的不同情感。同学们会使用准确的词吗？如果不会的话，请记住黄老师范文用词哦！
这道题从逻辑上来说比较简单，题干核心词较少。同学们抓住music和universal language去论述即可。但是该题的难点在于论点的选词和构思上。对于选词，音乐的节奏，韵律，传达的不同情感。同学们会使用准确的词吗？如果不会的话，请记住黄老师范文用词哦！
对于这道题构思，黄老师推荐的思路为：让步同意。文章结构为：
1.支持1 – 音乐能够被不同语言文化的人所理解。
结论：音乐可以传达感情的通用语言，但并不是传统意义上的通用语言。
（觉得复杂的同学可以直接写结论：音乐是通用语言。）
对于让步结论法，黄老师想说一下：很多话题如果强行得出一个一边倒结论，从事实上来说都不是很可信，而可信度虽然不是雅思评分的点，但是会极大的增加文章的说服力，说人话就是更容易得高分。
就比如我们这道题，音乐完属于完全能替代语言的通用语言吗？显然不是。但是音乐确实又存在着很多通用语言的特性。所以这时我们就需要用让步结论了，一种非常好用的让步法是：条件限定+同意/不同意。比如，我们这里的条件就是：感情沟通。加上该条件，会使文章一下子变得更加的可信了。
有条件：音乐可以传达感情的通用语言，但并不是传统意义上的通用语言。
是不是前者更加的可信呢？那么，带着这样的思路，我们来看看范文吧
参考1：Harvard News – New Harvard study says music is universal language
参考2：Psychology Today – Is Music a Universal Language?
Music has always been and continues to be the universal language of mankind. To what extend agree disagree?
Music carries a set of unique codes and acoustic features, such as tonality and tempo, which are in fact universally understood. By analyzing a song’s patterns, one can communicate across cultural and linguistic boundaries in ways that cannot be achieved with ordinary languages like English or French: audiences don not have to speak German to enjoy a composition by Beethoven.
Furthermore, music truly is a universal system for communicating emotion. People are pretty good at detecting the emotions conveyed in unfamiliar music idioms – that is, at least the two basic emotions of happiness and sadness. When we listen to a piece of music, either from our culture or from another, we infer emotion on the basis of melodic cues that mimic universal prosodic cues. For instance, higher pitch, more fluctuations in pitch and rhythm, and faster tempo convey happiness, while the opposite conveys sadness, all of which are universally comprehensible.
However, music certainly is not a universal language in the sense that one could use it to express any thought to any person on the planet. On the contrary, music does have the power to evoke deep primal feelings at the core of the shared human experience regardless of ethnicity and language differences. It that sense, music truly is a universal language.
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