本周PTE大作文真题范文&解析（公司的长短期战略/高中生学习戏剧优缺点/个人成就）

各位学霸们好，今天黄老师为大家带来本周PTE考场出现的三篇难点大作文范文 & 解析。

PTE大作文一直是一个被大部分同学所忽略的一道题，不少人认为套套模版就好了，不值得另外准备。但是，这道题还是有很多陷阱和注意点的。比如：

PTE 大作文注意点

考题1：Do you think company of consumer goods should focus on long-term reputation or short-term strategies?

这道题需要我们把短期和长期策略进行比较，同学们一定不能只写自己支持的一边，而忽略掉另一边。

又比如考题2：What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of high school students learning plays centuries ago?

这道题很多同学写成学习play的好处坏处，而忽略了论证高中生和古代这两个核心词了。另外，这两个词绝对不是抄下来就好，同学们需要在论述中出现解释和说明，才能得到一个高分discourse。

再比如考题3：25. Do you think the place he or she grow up can determine the achievement of the person. List a celebrity who becomes famous because of the place he or she grew up.

需要同学们用一位名人举例，那么是不是把人名列出来就行了呢？显然不是的，比如我们写了一个Yao Ming，电脑肯定不知道你说的是不是名人，所以这时我们就需要解释一下，who is the most famous basketball player，电脑才能理解这是一个名人。

同学们可以发现，这些题目之间还是存在非常多的细节的，所以即便是可以套模版，同学们也要确保这些细节都操作正确，否则还是容易出现扣分的情况。

公司的长期声誉/短期战略

那么，带着这些注意点，同学们来看看黄老师的范文吧！

Do you think company of consumer goods should focus on long-term reputation or short-term strategies?

* 该题可以最后一段比较（但是不论证，较为简单）；也可以在中间段直接比较+论证（较难）

* 该题例子为中间段比较论证的写法，同学们考试时可以自行选择

论点1：Short-term marketing activities can effectively produce temporary boost in sales number.

展开1：By providing incentive to customers, such as free trail, coupons, offers or discounts, these sales promotions can infuse immediate revenue into a business by encouraging potential consumers to notice a specific promoted product among its competitors and eventually make a purchase.

论点2：Diverting the bulk of marketing spend away from long-term brand building and towards short-term, sales-driven targets may lead to visibly lower overall returns in the long run.

展开2：This is because it weakens brand image, which sustain long-term business performance, and also weakens the ability of organizations to build trust because as trust and reputation are inexorably linked.

秒懂逻辑：虽然短期促销有好处 + 但是长期品牌建立的好处更大

高中生学习戏剧的优缺点

What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of high school students learning plays centuries ago?

* 该题涉及词汇较难，黄老师推荐同学们仔细背诵下列词汇

论点1：The dazzling thought-world of the classic plays, which used to be restricted to the privileged few, give students ideas of civilization and happiness.

展开1：The participant will have the chance to meet the giants of human civilization through dialogue accompanied by a presentation of theatrical plays along with the importance of the Greek tragedy, a form of writing that had the ability to stare at the abyss of the human soul.

论点2：Great ancient literature has the power to give adolescents meaningful interpretations of our current reality, nurturing their various abilities.

展开2：Classics is a wide-ranging discipline, which incorporates elements of history, archaeology, art, religion, mythology, philosophy, gender and queer studies, and numerous other disciplines. These classes enable students to develop greater life skills such as perspective, cultural understanding and creativity.

秒懂逻辑：教授文化 + 培养其他能力

个人成就

Do you think the place he or she grow up can determine the achievement of the person. List a celebrity who becomes famous because of the place he or she grew up.

* 该题名人随便编即可，但是一定要解释清楚该名人是干嘛的，要不然电脑可能无法识别

论点1：Individual development can vary because of different learning opportunities and the environment in which learning takes place, which are all significantly connected to one’s birth place.

展开1：For instance, Kobe Bryant, who is one of the most renowned basketball players, grew up in a wealthy family in which his father is a well-established basketball player who earned a fortune in his career. Because of his birth family, Kobe can have opportunities which his counterparts dare not dream, including being coached by other hall-of-fame basketball players and participation in various professional basketball camps, all of which had led to his ultimate success in his career.

论点2：The place one grew up also shapes the mindset of the person, which in turn largely affect his or her future achievement.

展开2：Differences in unique environmental experiences during childhood could lead to disparities in motivation to practice, and in the type of personality formed, as well as in how and when exceptional psychological abilities are developed. Positive experiences with parents, or encouragement from siblings or friends can all attribute to a positive mindset of a person, which assists him or her in conquering various conundrums in his future career and in achieving his or her career goals.

秒懂逻辑：更多儿时专业训练机遇 + 更好的性格成长

本周PTE大作文真题范文&解析（公司的长短期战略/高中生学习戏剧优缺点/个人成就）