上周(2021.9.4)雅思大作文真题范文- 【无人驾驶汽车的广泛使用】极高频题!

上周(2021.9.4)雅思大作文真题范文- 【无人驾驶汽车的广泛使用】极高频题!

上周(2021.9.4)雅思大作文真题范文- 【无人驾驶汽车的广泛使用】极高频题!


各位学霸们好,今天黄老师给大家带来上周六(2021.9.4)雅思大作文真题解析,上周考题如下:


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真题分析/满分答案


2021.9.4真题

It’s better for society and individuals if driverless cars are widely used. To what extent do you agree or disagree.


科技预测类】题型最近出现的非常频繁密集,极有可能为后面雅思大作文的重点题型之一,所以同学们请务必仔细记忆【黄老师范文中的好词好句】,这些词句都是黄老师从【英文期刊】中摘抄而来的地道语句,绝非中式英语!


在看范文前,黄老师想强调一点:该题在审题时同学请务必注意【题干中的限定individuals and society】。这道题对于论述的结果有限定 – 个人和社会。所以同学们在写作时一定要注意同时点到无人驾驶对个人【往小了写】和社会【往大了下】的影响。


本文精选【满分词汇】如下,同学们可以在看范文前优先记忆一下下列词汇,然后再看文章效果更佳哦!


autonomous / automated / automation / autopilot 自动化(根据词性选择使用场合)

inevitable adj. 不可避免的 

fatalities (death toll) n. 死亡人数

eradicate v. 根除

bumper to bumper (保险杠贴保险杠) traffic jams n. 超级大堵车

nose-to-tail 一辆接一辆(等于bumper to bumper)

consistent adj. 连贯一致的


那么,接下来和同学们请黄老师一起来看范文吧!


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满分范文


2021.9.4真题

It’s better for society and individuals if driverless cars are widely used. To what extent do you agree or disagree.



完整范文:(参考英文期刊杂志)

The reality of autonomous cars may still be a way off, whereas they do seem to be an inevitable factor in our future transport systems. So far, we have already been exposed to partial autonomous driving with autopilot and automatic modes in many new vehicles, which enables cars to park themselves, steer down a motorway, change lanes and adjust speed to oncoming traffic. In my opinion, (despite some slight flaws如果文章出现让步段,可以加上该句话,本文并未写让步段,所以可以去掉), vehicular automation will be a positive development for both individuals and society as a whole.


Once widely implemented, automated driving systems could prevent a sheer number of severe accidents and save countless lives through their ability to reduce the single largest cause of road accidents – human error. A majority of road fatalities are attributed to human errors such as speeding, drink driving and distractions occurring within and outside the vehicle, causing millions of people either killed or fatally injured worldwide annually. By removing manual driving controls from humans, autonomous vehicles would eradicate all fatalities involving human error.


It is also possible for driverless cars to allow for disabled and those less mobile to get around easier and comfortably. There are a great number of people worldwide who have restricted mobility as a result of age or disability, which means with fully automated cars, there will be no need for drivers’ licenses or tests for them, meaning that people who have been considered a driving risk in the past will have access to driving technology without putting themselves or others in danger.


With autonomous cars able to sense other cars around them and communicate with them, bumper to bumper traffic jams should be a thing of the past. Automatic braking functions will not only prevent nose-to-tail crashes but will also allow driverless cars to travel at consistent distances from one another, which means speed limits will also be increased as the likelihood of vehicles crashing will be greatly reduced.


In conclusion, I firmly believe that automated driving is highly advantageous for both individuals and society. 



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