本周六(9.18)雅思大作文【国家经济增长与国民幸福】范文&该题巨难!

本周六(9.18)雅思大作文【国家经济增长与国民幸福】范文&该题巨难!

本周六(9.18)雅思大作文【国家经济增长与国民幸福】范文&该题巨难!


各位学霸们好,今天黄老师给大家带来本周六(2021.9.18)雅思大作文范文,本周题目如下:



Some experts suppose that when a country is already rich, any additional increase in economic wealth does not make its citizens happier. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


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题目分析


昨天考完雅思的同学都一片哀嚎,普遍反应大作文题目太难。这道题确实无论从思路和词汇方面都非常的深奥,因为讨论的是物质需求和幸福的关系。


这类范文其实非常常见,往往来说同学们可以从物质和精神追求作为切入点来写,也就是 material vs mental happiness。最后的结论也是类似的,即find a right balance between money and life. 这道题黄老师采取的也是类似的结构,同学们可以参照下文范文。


对于这篇文章来说,词汇是一个难点,如果反复使用money money的话那么词汇难以出彩,同学们可以适当的考虑替换成 materialistic pursuits/materialism  物质追求/物质主义,或者是wealth/fortune财富,等词,其他的8分词汇可见范文中蓝色标记。


那么,带着上面的思路,我们一起来看看范文吧:



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2021.9.18真题


Some experts suppose that when a country is already rich, any additional increase in economic wealth does not make its citizens happier. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


满分词汇:


cliché n. 陈词滥调

materialistic pursuits / materialism  n.物质追求/物质主义

in vain 白白浪费

envision  v.梦想

millionaires billionaires  n.百万/亿万富翁

financial wiggle room 金钱回旋余地


范文:


The debate over the cliché that money cannot buy happiness has become an cliché itself in various developed nations, which leads to a simple, yet important question: if materialistic pursuits are not making people happier, are the effort spent pursuing better careers, nicer homes, and faster cars, in vain


it is undoubtedly true that wealth signifies success, enhancing people’s economic motivation – their drive to work – and improving their standard of living.

Therefore, ordinary people in developed world would envision the lives of millionaires and billionaires as stress-free, blissful versions of their own, and often attribute life’s problems to a lack of financial wiggle room.


However, prioritizing money over other essential aspects may undermine happiness by forcing people to unwillingly sacrifice their free time to make more money. It takes much time and energy away from other life domains that make an vital and positive contribution to present life satisfaction, such as family and health.


Furthermore, excessively pursuing materialism can lead to overworking in many cases, which negatively impacts general wellbeing and productivity. Overworked employees, employers, and entrepreneur are probably not getting much exercise and taking enough breaks, which can cause long-term mental and physical health problems. In extreme cases, working overwhelmingly and routinely over a long period of time in pursuing of wealth can even lead to death, and similar cases have been reported in wealthy countries repeatedly every year. 


In conclusion, although additional wealth can make people satisfied to some extent, I believe the long-term impacts of policies directing residences to focus too much on money is detrimental. Instead, government should direct its citizens to find a right balance between money and life, which is the paramount contributor of happiness. 


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