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各位学霸们好，今天黄老师跟大家来分享一下本周六（2022.1.22）雅思大作文真题解析和范文。
所有范文均有黄老师通过整理英文期刊杂志独家创作哦，绝非中式英语！同学们可以放心积累地道好词好句。
本周考题如下：
2022.1.22真题
In many countries, children are becoming unhealthy. Some people think that the government should have the responsibility. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
这道题的话题范畴属于健康类话题，同学们需要注意到几点：
1.agree类型题目写一边倒和让步法得分一样，只需有道理即可（绝对没有让步法得分高一说，同学们可以自行参考考官范文）
2.这道题一定要围绕着孩子的健康来论述，千万不要写着写着就变成人们的健康了。
3.一定要至少写一个中间段论述政府的责任，然后再论述其他的（e.g. 家长）的责任。
4.健康类话题容易在词汇上落入俗套，同学们可以先理解下列8分词汇，然后再在范文中结合上下文理解背诵，这样效果更佳哦！
满分词汇：
national interest n. 国家利益
marshal v. 调用
toll n. 损失总量
legal guardians n. 法定监护人
primary caregivers n. 首要照顾人
role models n. 榜样
be accountable v. 对…负责
picky eaters n. 挑食的人
consistently adv. 持续地
那么，接下来我们来看范文吧（需要雅思大作文范文合辑的请找黄老师领取哦：涵盖2021-2022所有考试题目 + 海量母语级8分词汇 + 期刊级别范文分享！绝对是市面上质量最高的雅思大作文范文）
2022.1.22真题
In many countries, children are becoming unhealthy. Some people think that the government should have the responsibility. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
满分词汇：
national interest n. 国家利益
marshal v. 调用
toll n. 损失总量
legal guardians n. 法定监护人
primary caregivers n. 首要照顾人
role models n. 榜样
be accountable v. 对…负责
picky eaters n. 挑食的人
consistently adv. 持续地
政府责任段：
Maintaining youth health is in national interest as a country with a healthy youth population is required to marshal less resources to respond to decent public health in the long run. Conversely, if diseases and illnesses are left untreated in their early age, citizens will be forced into hospital in increased numbers, waiting for government to allocate health professionals and prescribed medicines at the expense of taxpayers’ money. Consequently, there will be a heavy toll to be paid in a nation’s economy
家庭责任段：
Parents, as legal guardians and primary caregivers of their children, are the most important role models in a child’s life and therefore should also be accountable for their children’s health. For instance, children, who cannot purchase or prepare their own meals, are dependent on the adults in their lives to provide healthy foods. Children, especially picky eaters, are more likely to eat foods they see their parents and caregivers eating and enjoying. Similarly, if adults fails to demonstrate a healthy lifestyle consistently for young children, it will be more likely for these kids to grow up suffering from various health problems.
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