2021年10月30日雅思大作文【巨婴父母文化】满分词汇与高分段落

各位学霸们好，今天黄老师来跟大家分享一下上周六（2021.10.30）雅思大作文真题，上周真题如下：

真题分析

2021.10.30真题

Nowadays, some parents put a lot of pressure on their children to succeed. What are the reasons? Is this a positive or negative development for children?

该题问到的话题非常典型 – 父母对孩子的教育 – 这个话题属于母话题范畴，非常非常高频，所以黄老师推荐大家一定牢记范文好词好句。

首先，我们还是在看范文之前分析一下该题型，对于这道题有几点需要注意：

1.该题属于双问题型话题，对于该类话题同学们两个问题都必须用至少一段中间段来回答，切忌不要只在开头结尾回答某个问题！

2.第一个问题的reasons有复数，所以同学们务必记住要写至少2个原因（原理可以参加黄老师上期视频 – 剑桥考官解析雅思大作文分段），而第二个问题没有复数，可以只写一个好处/坏处。

3.范文中用到了一个俚语‘helicopter parent’，该词组表示对于孩子过度保护的父母，也就是巨婴的父母。对于这类俚语同学们必须确保是在英文中广泛使用的，并且不属于专业术语。否则慎用。

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那么，接下来我们来看范文吧！（所有范文均有黄老师从英文期刊中摘抄好词好句写出，绝非中式英文）

满分词汇/高分段落

2021.10.30真题

Nowadays, some parents put a lot of pressure on their children to succeed. What are the reasons? Is this a positive or negative development for children?

满分词汇：

pour all of their energy into v. 倾注所有能量

great start in life n. 赢在人生的起跑线上

live through v. 介入…的生活

pay off v. 回报

envision v. 预期

unique insight n. 独特的见解

helicopter parent n. ‘巨婴型’父母

better grades n. 更好的成绩

extracurricular activities’ awards n. 课外奖项

resourcefulness n. 八面玲珑

开头段：

There is no manual for parenting. Every parent does their best to work it out as each day passes. They pour all of their energy into providing a better life for their child and want to know that their best is enough to get their child off to a great start in life.

原因段：

It is undeniable that parents live through their children and also make a sheer amount of sacrifice for their children, which means they want them to pay off. For many parents, the most desirable compensation is not momentary; instead, it is their kids ‘achievement. In addition, parents often envision their children to have a better life than they did, so they set big goals for them.

好处段：

Parents know what is best for their child because they have a unique insight into the needs, tendencies, and desires of the child based on their instincts and experiences with them. This dynamic creates a distinct perspective that is impossible to be replicated by anyone else and puts the parents in the best position to guide the child into becoming a well-achieved adult.

坏处段：

Dominance over kids ‘future sometimes poses overwhelming pressure on them and lead to helicopter parent culture. although it delivers immediate results such as better grades and extracurricular activities’ awards, it may hinder the qualities most needed for entrepreneurship and more generally, for success in adulthood – adaptability, resourcefulness and creativity.

2021年10月30日雅思大作文【巨婴父母文化】满分词汇与高分段落