各位学霸们好，今天黄老师给大家带来上上周雅思大作文真题范文和解析（上上周太忙忘记发了）。题目如下：
2021.03.20真题
Some believe policemen should be armed with guns in order to prevent street crimes. However, others think this measure would raise the level of social violence. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
该题非常典型，为犯罪&社会类题型，该题型词汇非常困难！黄老师在写范文时查阅了大量英文期刊，同学们可以根据范文背诵自己喜欢的地道词句。
同时，本题有两种回忆版本，话题均一样但是问题不同：
版本1 – Do you agree or disagree?
版本2 – Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
同学们请切记：这两种问题的回答方式是不同的！
对于agree or disagree题型：可以写一边倒或者两边讨论，只要有道理分数一样！并不是一定要写让步段得分才高！最后结论推荐支持某一边。
对于discuss both views题型：双放观点都必须讨论，并且只能证明为什么对不能证明为什么错（很多同学会在这方面失分）。最后结论推荐支持某一边。
同时，对于两种题型，同学们必须最后都要得出一个确切的立场，不能得出模凌两可的结论（e.g. 这件事还需要进一步讨论，值得我们注意）。对于逻辑不好的同学来说黄老师推荐：结论写支持某一边，这样不容易出错。
那么，对于这类题型来说，可以使用的满分词汇为：
jurisdiction n. 辖区
armed cops n. 武装警察
dissuade v. 劝阻(persuade同词根+dis反义词缀)
felony n. 重罪
interventive mechanism n. 干预机制
On the other end of the spectrum 另一方面来说
shootout n. 枪战
ensue v. 接踵而至
vicious circle 恶性循环
homicide n. 凶杀
unjustifiably adv. 无正当理由地
ambience n. 氛围
marginalised communities n. 边缘社区
patrol n. 巡逻
ubiquitous adj. 无处不在的
dispatch v. 派遣
上述词汇在范文内都有用到，那么接下来我们就一起看范文吧！（范文采取的中和结论法，逻辑不好的同学请勿模仿）
2021.03.20真题
Some believe policemen should be armed with guns in order to prevent street crimes. However, others think this measure would raise the level of social violence. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
支持段：
There are two common justifications for roving armed cops on street or in cars: community safety and the safety of police officers themselves. This is because the presence of armed police officers can dissuade potential criminals from attempting violent felony to some extent. Furthermore, firearms can be employed as a defensive and interventive mechanism when such crime does happen.
反对段：
On the other end of the spectrum, where cops carry guns, criminals think they need to as well, and more shootouts ensue. This may create a vicious circle that homicide levels escalate in jurisdictions where police routinely carry firearms. Furthermore, this could lead to concerns about being shot by accident or unjustifiably, and the ambience created by seeing guns on the street is oppressive, rather than a liberating, to some people, especially those in marginalised communities.
中和段：
In a nutshell, although firearms are a necessary part of policing, the question is whether all police officers need to carry a gun in every situation, every time they go out on patrol, and whether police firearms should be ubiquitous and visible.
As for me, armed police force should only be dispatched from base to respond toserious firearms incidents rather than being continually present in the community.
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