4月17日雅思考试大作文《年轻人的户外活动》范文&满分词汇

各位学霸们好，今天黄老师给大家带来上周六（4.17）雅思大作文真题范文 & 解析。上周考题如下：

4月17日雅思考试大作文《年轻人的户外活动》范文&满分词汇

More young people spend less time on their weekends and holidays to do activities outdoors in a natural environment. What are the reasons? What might encourage young people to do outdoor activities?

这已经是连续第二周出现report类型的题目了，对于该类题目解题思路比较生疏的同学请一定要注意了哦！

题目分析

对于该类题型，黄老师有点需要提醒各位学霸的：

1.report类型的问题千万不要出现个人立场！！！

比如：这是坏事，我不支持这件事。类似的句子都不能在文章中出现。如果同学们不确定哪些题型是report类型的话，请记住下列的大作文题型：

-What are the causes and solutions?

-What are the causes and effects?

-What are the advantages and disadvantages?

尤其是第三个问题，同学们千万不要跟‘这是好事还是坏事’和‘优点是否大于缺点’弄混了，这两个问题需要同学们给个人立场。而‘What are the advantages and disadvantages’则不需要。

2.report类型题目切忌假大空，特别是写解决方案的时候：

这一点黄老师在上周范文中提过，鉴于这个问题非常普遍，黄老师在说一次：

不要 ‘喊口号’！比如：如何让人们健康的生活 – 我们得呼吁人们采取一种健康的生活方式，摒弃不健康的习惯。同学们可以发现，这类的解决措施更多的是‘口号’而不是‘措施’，换句话来说就是无法落实的行为。所以同学们请切记：在写解决方案的时候，一定要写可以落实的行为，而不是假大空的口号。

那么，带着上面这些要点，同学们来看看黄老师的范文吧（范文均由黄老师参考网上英文期刊杂志资料而写，可以直接背诵好词好句）

满分词汇/原因段/解决段

2021.04.17真题

More young people spend less time on their weekends and holidays to do activities outdoors in a natural environment. What are the reasons? What might encourage young people to do outdoor activities?

满分词汇：

obsess v. 痴迷于

absorbed in v. 陷入

mash buttons 敲键盘（指玩电脑）

reluctant adj. 不愿意

excursion n. 户外郊游

time-consuming adj. 消耗时间

be occupied 被占据（表示一直做某件事而无暇顾及其他）

cram schools 课外补习班

reward scheme 奖励机制

原因段1：

It is extremely common for kids nowadays to be obsessed with screens and absorbed in digital devices, which prevents them from doing outdoor activities. With the giant amount of gaming products available to kids of all ages, it is only normal for them to stay inside and mash buttons all day, and they cannot bring video games outside because the glare means it is impossible for them to see the screen.

原因段2：

On the other hand, parents are reluctant to be on excursion with their children, as it is a time-consuming activity. On the contrary, whether kids are watching television, or are simply tapping away on a tablet, they are occupied and in one place, which means parents can get on with things they desire too.

解决段1 & 2：

In order to encourage children to go outdoors, parents should adapt an outdoor mindset about their kids and reconsider things like whether a ballet class or a cram schools worth more than climbing trees and exploring nature. It is highly encouraging for kids to do outdoor activities if parents can inform them it is okay to get wet, dirty, and messy in a park or creek. Besides, parents could suggest an active period of time, be an hour or 40 minutes, once a day, followed by a reward scheme such as a video game session afterwards, and see how their kids take to it.

4月17日雅思考试大作文《年轻人的户外活动》范文&满分词汇