2021年11月11日雅思大作文【名人收入是否合理】真题解析&范文

各位学霸们好，今天黄老师跟大家来分享下本周（2021.11.11）雅思大作文真题 & 解析范文，本周考题如下：

Professional workers like doctors, nurses and teachers make a greater contribution to society and so should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

题目分析

【名人收入是否合理】这类题型每年必考！在去年的年底也出现过类似题目，所以同学们一定要熟练掌握其思路和对应的高分词汇搭配（见范文），对于这道题来说，需要注意的点如下：

1.同学们在论述时必须要提到名人和普通职业的比较，而不能只提名人如何如何，而忽略了普通职业。

2.题干中的contribution不要漏掉，这道题需要同学们从对社会的贡献作为切入点论述，所以名人的工作很辛苦什么的就不能写了。

3.同意不同意这类题目是可以写一边倒or双边讨论的，两种写法得分一样！并不存在两边分数更高这一说，同学们可以根据想到的点来决定文章结构。

另外，同学们一定要注意，大家在写作文时一定不要盲目追求高端词，其实真正得分高的并不是非常高端复杂的词，而是最地道的书面词组搭配，所以同学们一定要在黄老师的范文中积累背诵（范文借鉴英文期刊杂志，绝非中式英语），特别是对于这类高频话题，只有积累到位了，考试才能熟练用出这些加分词！

因为这道题的用词和思路和去年同期考试类似，所以同学们可以直接参照去年黄老师的范文进行词汇&思路背诵：（但是写作时逻辑略有不同，这里同学们注意上面三条原则即可）

满分词汇以及高分段落

2020.12.12真题

Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

满分词汇：

net worth n. 净资产

monetary adj. 金钱的

worthiness n. 价值度

modest adj. 平庸的

material wealth n. 物质价值

moral value n. 道德价值

支持段1：

On one hand, celebrities, along with their unattainable lifestyles – snaps of designer clothes, hyper cars or even private jets – are what teenagers nowadays aspire to. This has glorified the wealthy to adolescents by tracking one’s value and worthiness to society solely on its monetary worth. On the other hand, although many of the top athletes, actors and performers deserve their multi-million-dollar pay cheques — most are incredibly talented and diligent, there are also far less paid occupations, such as childcare workers, teachers, nurses, and plenty of other workers, also bring skills and strong work ethics to their respective fields and contribute to the public good. Therefore, it will be likely for kids nowadays to deem such professions as undesirable based on their modest incomes.

支持段2：

The other very worst thing is that such phenomenon can confuse children success with material wealth, as renowned public figure, because of their massive salaries, will simply, maybe unconsciously, feel that they are worth more, not just in material terms, but in terms of moral value or contribution to society, which can easily be spotted on social media and is extremely misleading to teenagers.

2021年11月11日雅思大作文【名人收入是否合理】真题解析&范文