2021年12月4日雅思大作文【可持续发展】真题范文(话题有深度)

2021年12月4日雅思大作文【可持续发展】真题范文(话题有深度)

2021年12月4日雅思大作文【可持续发展】真题范文(话题有深度)


2021年12月4日雅思大作文【可持续发展】真题范文(话题有深度)


 

各位学霸们好,今天黄老师来跟大家分享本周六(2021.12.4)雅思大作文真题范文和解析,本周考题如下:


The key to solving environmental problems is simple: the present generation is willing to have a less comfortable life for the sake of the future generation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


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解题步骤分析


这道题非常有深度,考核的是同学们对可持续发展的理解,对其不大了解的同学可能会想不到观点。对于这类话题,写一边倒结论太过于绝对且不好构思论点,所以黄老师建议的是写中和法,即正反讨论 + 中立结论


比如,对于这篇文章:


1.支持段部分环境问题确实是由个人追求高品质生活造成,所以个人降低生活品质追求可以解决一部分环境问题

2.反对段:但是还有一部分环境问题是由工业等因素造成,需要政府制定政策来解决。

3.结论:解决环境问题需要政府和个人齐心协力(work in concert)


同时,环境类的话题词很容易写,但是很难出彩,所以同学们请务必牢记范文中好词搭配(蓝色部分),这些都是考试中一定可以用到的8分词汇!!!


那么,接下来我们来看范文吧!(所有范文均由黄老师从英文期刊杂志中摘抄整理,同学们可以直接背诵)


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满分范文参考


2021.12.4真题


The key to solving environmental problems is simple: the present generation is willing to have a less comfortable life for the sake of the future generation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


满分词汇:


on the verge of 处在…的边缘

rampant development n. 暴走的(失控的)发展

replenish v. 重新补充

execution n. 执行

persist v. 持续存在

intensity v. 加剧

impose v. 施加

carbon footprint n. 碳足迹

offset v. 抵消

on the ground 落实


开头段:


Our Earth is on the verge of climate catastrophe: human activity is leading to the extinction of species and habitats and loss of bio-diversity, and population explosion is straining the already scarce resources. Many people, therefore, have raised concern about sustainable development, which requires the current generation to sacrifice for the future. 


支持段:


It is true that the modern society of consumerism and rampant development is destroying our world, in which the biggest problem is that individuals do not realize the severity of the problem. When the ultimate aim of most inhabitants on Earth is to chase better life, we will continue consuming resources at an alarming rate and quicker than our planet is able to replenish. 【Heavy metals, nitrates and plastic are toxins responsible for pollution: water pollution is caused by oil spill, acid rain, urban runoff; air pollution is caused by various gases and toxins released by industries and factories and combustion of fossil fuels; soil pollution is majorly caused by industrial waste that deprives soil from essential nutrients. 这段排比例子非常好,同学们选取其中一部分即可】Therefore, with individuals willing to give up a small part of comfort that they desire, these problems, which are all tangibly and intangibly linked with consumerism, will be alleviated significantly. 


反对段:


However, responsibility for the environment should be divided and shared by both government and individuals otherwise such problem will very likely persist and even intensify. For instance, if governments fail to impose environmental legislations to reduce industry carbon footprint whereas waiting for voluntary changes in individual behavior, the positive outcomes of individual effort, which are largely offset by an increase in the amount of greenhouse gas emitted by factories and lorries, can hardly make any difference on the ground.




2021年12月4日雅思大作文【可持续发展】真题范文(话题有深度)


2021年12月4日雅思大作文【可持续发展】真题范文(话题有深度)

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